With Baxter
and Dr. Destructo's storyline was wrapped up and nailed down, I had laid ground
work for the close sequence back on page 4. We revisit Dr. Peters getting ready
for surgery when he decides to get in another "session" with William.
Peters takes another turn here. Going from arrogant, pompous and condescending
on the first three pages to sympathetic on pages four and five and finally to
creepy and disgusting. Not bad for a secondary character who only appears in
seven pages of a story.
Right off
the bat I lay the ground work for the final panel of the story on the next
page. Matt expands my five panel script to seven very powerful panels. The best
being the "smile in the shadow" panel. With that one panel we have
moved from a super hero story to a horror story. (apropos for the material).
Matt and I both sweated the "drawstring" panel, worried how far is
too far for a site that has been striving to be all ages, but it works I think.
There is not a lot to say here other than I really like this page overall. Matt
does some great work here and story wise it works great as a set up for the
finale. With the magic word "abra-kadabra," we are propelled to the
big finish.
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