AND THE CASE OF
THE LITTLE GREEN MEN PAGE 6
This page went pretty much as scripted. The only real change (as I mentioned a few pages back) was that I originally had Dick "undercover" as a city worker wearing coveralls. In panel two, Dick was ditching his "cover" but now he is ditching his alien chewed coat. I love that Matt's cave in has a green glow that echoes the sewer water from previous pages. We get a brief breath before the next cliffhanger, but I manage to plant two very important seeds for later on. I feel like I was better learning to plant the functional stuff between the action beats and I was proud that they seemed subtle enough that no one would get them until the second read through. I love my last line on the page.