DICK RUBY AND THE CASE OF
THE LITTLE GREEN MEN PAGE 13
http://adventuresinpulp.com/dick-ruby-page-13/
There is
not much to say on this one. On the first page we establish that the tale
begins with a dame and ends with a bang on top of the Empire
State Building .
We played fair. No cheating. Here it is.
Originally
scripted as only three panels: Ruby firing. The big boom and the aftermath.
Matt played
my panel one out over three panels. I absolutely love the expressions he puts
on Dick's face. Then, brilliantly, instead of having a big panel with a big
explosion he pulled back with a small boom. It seems counterintuitive but works
amazingly well. The aftermath he breaks up into two panels as well, which gives
us a nice post climactic breath. So here we wrapped the meat of the story and I
wondered if anyone would come back the following week for the single epilogue
page that would button everything down.
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